- Start with a grey sea and end with a coloured sea to show before each other it was dull now with each other life is colourful.
- To get rid of the texting at the beginning as it wasn't really relevant and I could have filled it with something better.
- I was also told to add in footage of one bird flying around to show loneliness and then near the end had 2 birds to show love and happiness between them.
- I was told to have some more lyrics stuck to trees as this was a good effect but not too much incase it looks boring and repetitive.
Audience feedback
I decided to get some feedback on how I was getting on and I got this feedback:
